Design: What is the obsession of women and wings? I think you have some great ideas but need to work on your layout. It was exciting to see yo work on your interpretation of yourself but the layout defeated all the hard work you put in. Try and work on the principles of 2D – have you taken a class yet?. Each image seems to be just plopped on the page, on each side and they are small and about the same size.. Text Circ de Freak – the color of the background is to bold. I think the problem with the composition is the width of the stripes and the size of the shapes.. The stripes overpower the images. But good repetition of the stripes, on the tent and then on the background. Retro European circus poster??? Watch where the edges meet. Tent and stripes. Good to do some roughs I know you had fun in the class. I hope to see you again in another class as you could do some great work. angela
Design: What is the obsession of women and wings? I think you have some great ideas but need to work on your layout. It was exciting to see yo work on your interpretation of yourself but the layout defeated all the hard work you put in. Try and work on the principles of 2D – have you taken a class yet?. Each image seems to be just plopped on the page, on each side and they are small and about the same size..
ReplyDeleteText Circ de Freak – the color of the background is to bold. I think the problem with the composition is the width of the stripes and the size of the shapes.. The stripes overpower the images. But good repetition of the stripes, on the tent and then on the background. Retro European circus poster??? Watch where the edges meet. Tent and stripes. Good to do some roughs
I know you had fun in the class. I hope to see you again in another class as you could do some great work.
angela